This is better Stefan, but it kind of looks like a newspaper page or a brochure. Can you manipulate these images to make them look more sophisticated. They do not show a proficient ability to manipulate and construct images (L3), they are only basic (L2).
The font styles are better and this is an improvement. But your pull quote is still very basic. It seems like there is too much text here now.
Also - how many music mags do you know with a crossword???
Sir told me reduce text Add image if I can get one tonight Text boxes in bottom left below main picture Editors note are to basic look at white on red Background of images are lame 'Not rock n roll' Use grunge filter (possible option need to research further)
This is better Stefan, but it kind of looks like a newspaper page or a brochure. Can you manipulate these images to make them look more sophisticated. They do not show a proficient ability to manipulate and construct images (L3), they are only basic (L2).
ReplyDeleteThe font styles are better and this is an improvement. But your pull quote is still very basic. It seems like there is too much text here now.
Also - how many music mags do you know with a crossword???
Sir told me reduce text
ReplyDeleteAdd image if I can get one tonight
Text boxes in bottom left below main picture
Editors note are to basic
look at white on red
Background of images are lame 'Not rock n roll'
Use grunge filter (possible option need to research further)